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10 Firsts~Male!ReaderxAmerica~ ALTERNATE ENDING

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                I continued to watch the doctors and nurses work. After what seems like hours they stop. They all clap and begin to clean him up. I release the breath I’ve been holding as tears of relief roll down my cheeks. They take Alfred to a private room, a kind nurse gives me tissues as she guides me too it.

                I walk into the room and take a seat next to his bed. I smile at his sleeping face and reach out to hold his hand. I give it a small squeeze, and he squeezes back. A doctor comes in a few minutes later and tells me about Alfred’s condition.

    He was going to be fine. Sure he is going to be out for the football season but he is going to be fine.  My Alfred is going to be alright. I manage to get a hold of Arthur and tell him what happened. He was of course panicking but calmed down when I told him he was going to be fine. I called my mom who was busy on her vacation with her boyfriend in Spain. She told me it was a miracle from god and that Alfred was meant to live.

    Alfred woke up when his parents got to the hospital. Their quiet argument seemed to wake him up. They scold him before sobbing gently in his arms. I smile from my seat as I watch the touching scene. They later leave to go deal with Alfred’s totaled bike. He smiles gently at me, high on the morphine.

    “You’re so beautiful…” he whispers to me. I snort and flick his nose.

    “You’re so high.”

    “Check that off my bucket list wills ya...finally got high… Fucking awesome.” He closes his eyes and takes gentle breathes.

    “The doctor says you will be out for the season…”

    “That sucks…but at least I’ll live another day with you.” He opens his eyes and smiles. “You’re all that matters. Fuck football.” I chuckle and brush some stray hairs off his forehead before cupping his cheek.

    “You scared me shitless you dork.” Tears prickle at the corners of my eyes. He uses his other hand to cover mine on his cheek.  “Don’t do that ever again.”

    “I promise. There’s so much more I want to do with you…I can’t die now.” He closes his eyes and I smile as he falls asleep.

    ~~~

    “Alfred!” I call out angrily to my husband. I head out from the kitchen to the living room. I frown at finding Al sitting on the big leather couch, flat screen playing a football game.  He turns his head and smiles at me.

    “Yes, my dearest?”

    “Are you giving Davie cookies again?” He glances down at his lap before shaking his head.

    “…no…” he answers quietly.

    “You know how he gets when he eats sugar.” He laughs.

    “Come on! Kids need sugar to grow.”

    “He’s gaining weight because you keep giving him unhealthy foods.”  Alfred frowns and holds up a chubby baby in a bear onesie sucking on a cookie.

    “He’s getting ready for hibernation. Give it a rest (m/name). Come watch the game with us~.” I sigh but do so. I sit close to Al as he lays Davie back down on his lap, finishing the cookie for him. Davie has beautiful blue eyes and (Your hair color) hair. Al smiles at me and wraps an arm around my shoulder. I rest my head on his shoulder. He sits Davie up and points to the flat screen excitedly.

                “You’re going to grow up and become a football player just like daddy huh?” Davie claps his hands excitedly and bounces up and down. “Yes you are!” he blows a raspberry in his neck, causing Davie to giggle. I smile and poke and Davie’s chub. Davie tries to catch my finger and I let him, he sucking on my finger.

                “I love you…” I whisper at loud.

                “I love you too~.” Al kisses me gently on the cheek.  The team scores a touchdown and Alfred bolts upright, almost dropping Davie. “FUCK YEAH! TOUCHDOWN!”

                “DON’T DROP HIM YOU DUMB SHIT!”

 

My first love

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I prefer this one over the original ending :) And if it wasn't obvious Alfred continued with his football career being scouted and what not. You also fulfilled your dream career and live in a huge ass house. You both gots money. You and Al got married and adopted a little bundle of joy. I thought it's be appropriate to name him Davie cuz DAVIE FEELS.

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you called the son Davie ack the feels are true with this onePyong Cry